Help with an English exercise of redaction
Necesito estudiar ingles y la verdad es que no tengo mucho dinero ni tiempo para hacerlo entonces tengo que estudiar por mis propios medios.
Mi duda es la siguiente: I made an small redaction about football, but I think it has some mistakes. I will be grateful to you if you can help me to correct the mistakes.
The redaction is:
Football
I'm going to talk about football. It was originated in England.
To play football you need to be physically good and if you want to play it professionally you must train at least three or four times a week.
The rules of the game are: Two teams of eleven persons rival each other. The objective is to put a small ball into a rectangular form at the end of the of the stadium's ground.
In my city there are two football teams Estudiantes and Gimnasia. I am a fan of the first; sometimes I go to the stadium to see it.
Mi duda es la siguiente: I made an small redaction about football, but I think it has some mistakes. I will be grateful to you if you can help me to correct the mistakes.
The redaction is:
Football
I'm going to talk about football. It was originated in England.
To play football you need to be physically good and if you want to play it professionally you must train at least three or four times a week.
The rules of the game are: Two teams of eleven persons rival each other. The objective is to put a small ball into a rectangular form at the end of the of the stadium's ground.
In my city there are two football teams Estudiantes and Gimnasia. I am a fan of the first; sometimes I go to the stadium to see it.
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