Me podrían decir si este texto en ingles esta bien escrito en tercera persona

His name is Yulio. He lives in Jaruco. He loves sports. He goes running every day. He goes to the gym on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. He plays ball every Saturday, but soccer is his favorite sport. He gets up early every day to go to school because he is too far away. He likes to eat junk food. At night he sits on the porch of his house with his friends to hang out.